For Valentine’s Day my wonderful wife Pat has carefully and diligently purchased greeting cards over the years that contain poetic sentiments that were not offensive to writers like me who hate clichés and saccharine sweetness in their verse. In 2012, Pat asked me what kind of verses I might write for Valentine’s Day. It was a challenge to produce commercial verses that real poets might tolerate. A warning to writers who may attempt this exercise: you can’t write just one, or even quit at a dozen. You may become obsessed for weeks. My own obsession lasted through the writing of 57 verses that spanned several card categories.
Some background in poetry seems appropriate at this point. I wrote my first publishable poem at age 13, and Robert Bly, the prolific poet, editor, and social activist, once rejected a college-era poem of mine with a note saying that it was “almost a perfect poem.” Nevertheless, I had to compare my nascent poetry to that written by my closest friends, Henry S. Taylor—later to win the Pulitzer Prize for Poetry (1986)—and Kelly Cherry, another celebrated poet who became the Poet Laureate of Virginia. In those early days of sharing our writing with each other, you might understand my reluctance to offer poetry.
Although I have never been a serious student of poetry, I have continued to write verse my entire literary life. I have thus suffered enough rejections of individual poems and a collection to retreat and rather store them in what Robert Frost called his “strong box.” My strong box now includes more than 150 poems edited into two collections, and the overage that increases by about three to four new poems a year.
After reading the following samples of some of the shorter Valentine verses, you may want to exercise your own greeting card poetic imagination. But be advised, you might be surprised, as I was, by the sudden abyss of sentiment that results.
Undelivered Valentines
Photo by Pat Joynes
This card comes to you
As a momentary stay
Against television.
If you will make me
Your preferred channel
For drama and romance,
I promise to deliver you
An exciting season
Of happy memories.
______________________________
May I acknowledge
Your spectacular flights
Into the space of my heart?
My happiness now
Has interstellar dimensions
Because of you.
______________________________
Photo by Tommy White Photography
May I make an attempt
To say something that
I have never said before,
To utter a secret long repressed?
The thrill of your intimacy
Means everything
Significant to me.
__________________________
Sublime imagination
Contains a heroic aura
Of the romantically
Idealized relationship.
Or so it seems
Whenever I think
About you.
__________________________________
I am against respectability
Because I am willing
To make a fool of myself
In campaigning
For your attention.
______________________________
Biographically speaking,
I do not want to
Be ambiguous.
You are the most
Wonderful person in my life.
________________________________________
Do you want
Buoyant,
Enthusiastic,
And earnest?
Okay. I can be that way
For you.
_____________________________
I am committed
To a trial
By existence.
Knowing full well
That I will be found
Guilty of loving you.
_____________________________
Not motivated by reason,
Or prudence, or foresight,
Or any artificial sentiment,
I am loose headed,
And destined for you.
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Bestow by whispering
The secret confidences
That we share
Perfect oneness
Is love’s best labor
And our sweetest dream.
Photo by Jim Dillinger